Eh, this one’s
O-K,
solid in places
but
I kind of liked
the first one
better.
I wish this was more like the older piece
and things were like before
when the first piece you’d written was
your latest one.
You know?
Eh, this one’s
O-K,
solid in places
but
I kind of liked
the first one
better.
I wish this was more like the older piece
and things were like before
when the first piece you’d written was
your latest one.
You know?
Tags:09 NOV 07, bad neck pain, bad poetry, rubs the lotion
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